Post by Angmor on Mar 28, 2012 14:23:40 GMT -5
Well, here we are again, with the newly revised version of Elvorn's and my book, complete with new title. By the way, it's no longer in HTML format, otherwise thoughts would be italicized, and also certain words for emphasis. I may go back and put those in later. Without further ado, I bring you sample chapters of our book, '112':
No matter how many times he had safely reentered the atmosphere, Charles Grant could never feel entirely comfortable when the hull temperature readout climbed up near the red line. The saying among cargo-shuttle pilots was that any silent landing was a good landing. It referred to the klaxons that would activate if the shuttle was overheating, but Grant decided that they evidently had a different description of silence than the majority of humanity, because the bass rumble of the reentry burn assaulting the underside of the hull was enough to set his teeth to rattling.Pulling his eyes away from the temperature gauge, he glanced briefly at the other occupants of the shuttle’s bridge. In the pilot’s chair to his left, the diminutive figure of Captain Elizabeth Hugin deftly adjusted a few dials on the large control bank in front of her, her posture completely at ease as she made the myriad of minor course corrections that would keep the shuttle from burning up during reentry. She might have been described as pretty, but the captain’s appearance was all business. Mousy-brown hair brushed the shoulders of the leather jacket she wore over drab, extra-small fatigues, neatly framing her sharp-featured face and green eyes. Despite the mind-numbing volume of the turbines and the rapidly rising temperature gauge, that face did not betray the slightest hint of worry. Beth had been a commercial pilot for over a decade, Grant knew, and the gut-wrenching deceleration burn experienced during a planetary landing was nothing new to her.To Grant’s right, one of the passenger seats was filled by the last member of the shuttle’s crew: the contract procurement officer, Ramirez. In a previous life, Ramirez had been a gang-member on Apollo, and it showed, from his severe buzz-cut to his black jacket and combat boots. He and Beth shared an attitude of what Grant could only describe as “readiness,” but while the captain was relaxed and easygoing, Ramirez was a coiled spring. Old habits died hard, and the procurement officer was never without a knife or two and he often spent hours in the shuttle’s modest weight-room, punishing its disheveled punching bag. At the moment, however, he seemed to be enjoying the view out the viewscreen as the ship plummeted through the clouds.
Tightening the already snug safety harness over his bulky, six-and-a-half foot frame, the shuttle’s security officer admitted to himself that it bothered him when he was only separated from the incinerating three-thousand degree temperatures outside the shuttle by a pane of super-reinforced polycarbonate.
Suddenly, the viewscreen’s head-up display flickered and a calm female voice came over Grant’s headset. “Captain, we are now clearing the danger zone and hull temperature should begin to return to normal. I am engaging the atmospheric turbines to bring us to a horizontal flight path.”
“Thank you, Tavia,” Beth replied. “Full power on all turbines until we get down to thicker air.”
“You got it. Be aware that I still have no sensor readings on number three turbine. That includes coolant, so there is a very small chance of catastrophic failure.”
“How small?”
“I’d estimate about point-five percent.”
“We’ll risk it. Whatever’s causing the problem with your readings shouldn’t affect coolant levels.”
Grant grunted wearily. “You have such a nice way of saying it may or may not randomly blow up, Tavia.” Dealing with computers was not one of his specialties.
“Thank you, Charlie.” If a computer could sound smug, then Tavia was exuding self-satisfaction. “As the ship’s AI, it is my job to inform you of any inherent risks involved in the running of this shuttle, meaning things that would turn your frail human bodies into disconnected particles of vapor.” Ramirez snickered. “Also, the port authority is on line one and waiting to talk you down.”
“That’s fine, Tavia,” Beth interjected. “Put them through, I’ll let you know if we need anything else.”
The HUD flickered again and the communications light on her control panel lit up. A scratchy voice flooded through the cockpit. “Shuttle Beta-Tango-Niner-Niner, this is Hephaestus Port Authority. You are cleared for landing at dock seven-four-alpha. Repeat, cleared for dock seven-four-alpha, over.”
“Copy that Hephaestus PA, be advised that we’re getting some blank readings on one of our atmos engines, over.”
“Understood. I have emergency rescue crews on speed-dial. Don’t leave any smears on my landing pad, over.”
“I think they must transfer all of the port authority workers with professional attitudes to maintenance,” Ramirez said, grimacing.
“Don’t worry, if we do lose control, we’ll ram the tower.” Grant joked.
Rolling her eyes, Beth reached out and took the control yoke, easing it slightly back and forth. Agonizingly slowly, the ship rolled to port, seemed to hang suspended for a moment at thirty degrees, then, even more slowly, rolled back to a level deck. “Charlie,” she said, looking down at the artificial horizon in front of her, “lock in coordinates for spaceport dock 74-A, will you?”
“You’ve got it, Captain,” Grant said, entering the required target information.
The shuttle creaked alarmingly as the superheated metal hull began contracting in the cool air of Hephaestus’ atmosphere. Fortunately, the rapid expansions and contractions of a planetary landing had been planned for by the heavy engineering company responsible for making this particular type of shuttle, and the pliable metal of the outer hull could handle the strain of thousands of reentries. The shuttle was an older model; fifteen standard years had passed since it had rolled off the production line, but it was a surprisingly durable craft, with one of the densest pressure hulls on a ship available to civilians. After one look at the outside of the ship, anyone could see that this was a good thing, as the shuttle’s hull was scored with gouges and burns from collisions with floating debris. Its drab grey paint was chipped and peeling, with much of the slightly-iridescent armor underneath showing through.
Under the steady hand of Captain Hugin, the battered ship slowly leaned to starboard and came about, heading for the guidance beacon that the Hephaestus PA had just locked onto their radar. “Alright, can you and Ramirez head back and make sure we’re ready for unloading?” Beth yelled over the roar of the turbines, “I want everything ready when we collect our fee so that we don’t have a misunderstanding like last time.”
“On it, Beth.” Grant pressed the release on his safety harness and bounded to his feet, followed closely by Ramirez. He was never happy just sitting around. Which, of course, Beth knows, he thought to himself. She could have Tavia do it just as easily. He grinned.
Pulling off his headset, he grabbed the handrail on the left side of the bridge and jogged back to the hatch leading to the crew’s cafeteria. The cafeteria-cum-recreation room was sparsely decorated, bearing only a few token booths bolted against the walls. No one could remember the last time Beth had picked up passengers, so more accommodations than the crew required simply took up extra space. Grant glanced briefly at the booths, then turned to his right and opened a trapdoor in the floor.
After Ramirez had gone through, Grant grabbed the head of the ladder and slid effortlessly through the hatch coaming. His heavy leather boots thudded dully on the floor as he landed at the bottom of the ladder, turning to look down the corridor leading aft to Cargo Bay Two. On either side of the corridor, three identical doors led to crew cabins. The ones on the left were unused, the ones on the right belonged to Beth, in the farthest forward, Grant in the middle, and the ship’s stand-offish contract procurement officer on the end.
“I think you can handle making sure none of our cargo fell out of the hatch by yourself,” Ramirez said, opening the door to his cabin. “I am going to work on a project of mine.”
“Okay, just make sure you’re topside when our client drops by,” Grant replied, peering around Ramirez at the cabin. It seemed like every time he was able to sneak a glimpse in the room, a mess of electronic parts was actively engaged in covering every surface between the door coaming and the far wall. Ramirez’s hobby, if it could be called that, was building gadgets ranging from audio bugs to night-vision goggles out of old parts, but Grant held a secret belief that he was trying to make an army of tiny robots out of the old datapads and radios that he kept tearing apart.
“I will be there,” Ramirez assured him shortly, slamming the door with a marked lack of ceremony in Grant’s face. The security officer grunted, shrugged his shoulders and turned to the door to Cargo Bay Two.
And then the shuttle fell out from under him.
With a yell of surprise, Grant dropped back to the deck, landing awkwardly in a heap. Cursing, he carefully pushed himself to his feet, testing his weight on his left, which had taken most of his weight when he fell. Not a sprain, he decided, just bruised.
Hobbling to the ladder, he climbed up as quickly as he could, favoring his injured ankle. As he reached the top, the ship bounced again, almost throwing him back down the hatch. Grant pulled himself quickly onto the deck and staggered back through the cafeteria and onto the bridge, trying desperately to keep his balance as the ship jinked up and down.
Dropping heavily into the co-pilot’s chair, he fumbled with his harness. “What’s going on, Beth?” he yelled, grabbing the headset and jamming it down over his ears. Immediately a wave of chatter washed over him, trying to drown out the turbines.
“We’ve got a bug in engine three,” Beth’s eyes never left the viewscreen. “It’s not in sync with the other turbines and isn’t reducing power, so the shuttle’s slewing all over the place. Tavia’s working on isolating the cause of the problem, but she says that the system is still locking her out. Might take a few minutes.”
“I think joking about ramming the tower might not have been the best idea,” Grant said, scanning the airspeed and altitude data displayed on the HUD. “Have we got a few minutes?”
“Dock seven-four-alpha is only a few dozen klicks ahead. At this speed, we’re going to leave quite a dent in the traffic control tower. I’m trying to bring our speed down, but number three turbine is making that a real problem. Reduce power to turbines one and two to twenty percent.”
“Twenty percent, aye.” He eased the levers back another notch, waiting for the ship to slow. “She’s not responding. Cut the power?”
“We’re already taking a chance of one and two flatlining as is, hit the emergency brakes and cut all power to three and four!” Beth shouted, her knuckles white as she gripped the yoke, trying to keep the shuttle on a straight course.
Grant pulled a red handle under the console, and the shuttle’s speed dropped dramatically, allowing Beth to pull the nose up and slow down even more. Reaching across the panel in front of him, Grant pressed two buttons on Beth’s console, waiting for the sensors to indicate that the power levels of turbines three and four were dropping. Five seconds passed. Ten, fifteen, still nothing happened. Grant swore, pressing the release on his harness and swinging out of his seat. “Shutoffs aren’t responding! The system bug that’s making three go haywire must be affecting those as well. I’m heading down to engineering to turn it off manually!”
Beth jerked her head in what Grant thought was an affirmative, the tendons in her neck standing out clearly as she wrestled with the yoke. Diving for a handhold as the shuttle dipped again, he started making his way back toward the ladder he had gone down earlier, fighting to keep his footing on the wildly bucking deck. When he reached the hatch leading to the crew’s quarters, he sat down on the edge of the coaming and carefully eased himself down, making sure not to jar his injured ankle when the shuttle jumped. At the foot of the ladder, he turned left instead of continuing aft to the cabins and climbed down a second set of rungs built into the metal bulkhead. Immediately the antiseptic smell of the engineering spaces hit him. In old, combustion-engine powered craft that used grease in large quantities to lubricate the moving parts, the need for sterile conditions didn’t exist, but when too much accumulated detritus could foul a ship’s life support system, it paid to keep the bowels of a spacegoing craft clean.
“Alright Tavia,” Grant shouted into his headset, “What am I looking for?”
“There’s no need to shout, Charles; I’m filtering out the turbine noise from your headset’s audio pickup. Head aft and look for two red breaker switches on the black box next to the reactor. They’re easy to spot, so even you should be able to find them.”
“Got it,” Grant said, ignoring the insult and weaving his way through the banks of computer processors and navigational equipment until he stood facing the featureless grey block that supplied the shuttle with ninety percent of its power. “Black box. The one on the wall?”
“That’s right.” Grant thought he detected a hint of worry in the AI’s voice. “Now pull the breaker marked ‘EGN 3-4,’ and hurry up, we don’t have all day.”
Grant grabbed the handle of the breaker, more out of reflex than intent, as the ship pitched violently to port. Regaining his balance, he gripped the breaker and pulled down. Nothing happened. Taking a closer look, he realized that the hinges connecting the breaker to the black control panel were corroded and, without a doubt, had been so for a long time. Bracing his feet and squaring his shoulders, Grant gripped the breaker with both hands, pulling until the muscles in his forearms shook with the effort.
“Bloody son of a rusty, broken down—” he hurled a stream of invective at the immobile breaker switch before realizing, a second too late, that he was still connected to the Port Authority. Switching off his headset’s microphone, he looked around desperately for something that would help him maneuver the breaker into the off position.
“Tool locker!” Tavia’s voice cut into his audio channel. “Other side of the reactor. Come on, shift it, we’ve got another eight and a half klicks until we leave our mark on Hephaestus’ spaceport!”
Not bothering to reply, Grant dashed around the reactor block, instantly spotting the bright yellow “in case of emergency” box bolted to the inner hull. Knocking a few of the tools out of the case in his hurry, he fumbled to free a heavy-duty crowbar from its clips. The few moments it took to release it felt like an eternity that the shuttle didn’t have at that moment. Stumbling heavily against the reactor as the shuttle dropped another meter, the security officer jammed the crowbar bit in between the breaker and the face of the console, planting his feet and straining against the metal.
Come on, you bloody chunk of metal. I’m not going to die because of rust…
With a sharp crack, the breaker gave, flipping down to the ‘off’ position and sending Grant staggering against the bulkhead. As suddenly as they had begun, the tremors that had racked the shuttle stopped, and a few seconds later the roar of turbines one and two increased in volume and returned to a steadier cyclic rate.
Breathing heavily, Grant slid down the bulkhead and sat with his head on his arms, ignoring the trickle of blood coming from his hand where the crowbar had caught it in his fall.
“Tavia,” he said shakily, pulling the headset mic down to his mouth, “can you put me through to Beth?” Tavia huffed impatiently— Grant had no idea where she had picked that up— and a second later a welter of voices came through his headset. Before he could say anything, the voices were cut off as the channel was overridden.
“Shuttle Beta-Tango-Niner-Niner, this is Hephaestus Port Authority. Your airspeed is too high. Reduce your power, repeat, reduce power. Is this that faulty turbine you were talking about?” It was the PA officer they had talked to before.
Grant glanced at the breaker and stood up, walking slowly toward the ladder on the now steady deck. “Yeah, Hephaestus, that’s the one. We’ve got it under control now. You might still want to have those rescue blokes on standby though.”
“Copy that, Bee-Tee-Niner-Niner, we’ll roll out the welcome mat, over.”
A minute later, Grant slumped wearily down in his harness and stared out the front viewscreen at the flashing blue lights of the emergency rescue vehicles parked near shuttle dock seven-four-alpha. Beth was still hunched over the controls, her fingers flying over a dizzying array of switches and buttons as she deftly brought the lumbering shuttle to a standstill over the docking zone. Meticulously, she pulled the thrust control back, notch by notch, until, with the barest of bumps, the shuttle was no longer airborne.
Running her hand through her shoulder-length brown hair, Beth stared absently out the viewscreen as fire control crews scurried around the landing pad. Suddenly, she laughed, leaning back in her chair and grinning when Grant quirked an eyebrow at her.
“I wonder how Ramirez handled all his little tech pieces flying around like chaff?”
Grant chuckled as he envisioned the unsociable procurement officer having a heart attack as his carefully disassembled radio pieces were scattered around his room. Conquest of the galaxy: postponed, he thought to himself with a smile.