Post by Emma on Oct 18, 2010 18:58:39 GMT -5
The forest around here, I’d noticed, was in various stages of corruption.
Considering that Kirtan not only bordered the desert, but had also been besieged by it ever since its founding, I was not particularly surprised at the state of its foliage. While the rest of Du Weldenvarden was obsessed with nurturing beauty, which they considered as the most precious aspect of all life, this city had forsaken that in favour of staying alive. Despite being one of the smallest settlements, Kirtan put any fortified city to shame. With its barbed fences and merciless warriors, badly-behaved soldiers were often sent here for one simple reason- they weren’t likely to survive for very long.
Even this journey of official business from Ellesméra to Kirtan required me to have bodyguards- and a lot of them. I, the Du Weldenvarden general of ten years, rode in between four heavily armoured soldiers whose weapons were unsheathed and held at the ready. Even my mare, Nenya, wore finely crafted horse armour that was tinted spring green to match the foliage. We hadn’t run into any danger on the entire trip, but as Kirtan appeared in the not-so-far distance, the soldiers rode closer and the horses snorted and tossed their heads as the powerful stink of the ironworks of Kirtan wafted towards us.
I gazed at the blighted flora and fauna, either killed by the fumes of the ironworks or by the amount of blood spilled in this area. The trees grew more and more stunted until I could see clear over them from where I sat on Nenya. The ground foliage had been cleaved apart so many times that now only the hardiest of plants grew underfoot, and the horses had to avoid spiked roots and poisonous flowers. I had battled at Kirtan’s side many times over the past two hundred and fifty years, but I too had abandoned them when I was a high-ranking colonel during the Cleansing. I didn’t expect a warm reception.
As we entered the city limits, I swung my head around slowly, watching the citizens through the eye slits of my helmet. Even the poorest of the poor, covered with soot and sweat, watched our small procession with unflinching gazes. I admired the people of Kirtan. They were survivors of the highest calibre, and I felt no resentment or misunderstanding at their hatred of their own kin’s betrayal. However, showing pity on the surface would give viewers the idea of weakness. Even though they couldn’t see my face, I kept it grim, and my ice-blue eyes flashed dangerously.
As we arrived at the center of the Kirtan- the last guaranteed safe place, as the side facing the desert was full of soldiers and spiked barricades awaiting the next Urgal assault- we finally came to a halt. We were in the main plaza, which also happened to house the Iron Citadel, the seat of Kirtan’s count. I wasn’t meeting him, however- it was Lieutenant Eilia Rylinnell, one of the highest-ranking officers in the city, that I would be speaking to. I would be doing an entirely routine check-up on the soldiers stationed here, but there was another reason Dellanir had sent me personally- she feared a revolt.
After so many years and so many lives lost, Kirtan’s people weren’t about to abandon their own city, but she was convinced that one day they’d put up barricades and block out Du Weldenvarden as well. It was highly unlikely, considering they entirely relied on Osilon for their precious iron and the country as a whole for fresh soldiers, but Dellanir was dangerous when she was paranoid, and I wasn’t about to disobey her. And either way, there could very well be a grain of truth to her fears. I was here to see what that miniscule truth was, and uncover it before it grew into something dangerous.
I dismounted, seeing the lieutenant standing on the steps leading up to the Citadel. I passed Nenya’s reins to one of my bodyguards and gave the mare a praising pat on the neck. I was in full armour, the silver scales catching the light of the sun when it occasionally peeked out of the heavy cloud cover. I also had my closed helmet on, which I never removed in public, although my long ice-blonde hair tumbled out of it and down my back. The lieutenant didn’t look pleased to see me. That was obvious even with the intervening distance. With a deep sigh, I made my way towards her, my heavy boots clacking loudly.
“Atra esterní ono thelduin, Eilia alfa-kona.” I began the traditional elven greeting with a terse nod. Behind me, I heard my soldiers dismounting their steeds. Nyx willing, I would find this seed of revolt as quickly as humanly possible and go home.
Words;; 800 exactly! Yay!
Muse;; REALLY tired, so it could have been better.
Thoughts;; Ehh... never written with her before and I didn't really get to explore her personality here. So, not incredible. XP